All Comments on 'Tropical Steam'

It's because it may never happen but Oh My we want it to!

There was a little too much alcohol for me but that's just me. Well written story and great sex!

Delicious vacaton with someone special... but the narrative seemed rather too mechanical. All right, it's a story about sexual play, but this was more like a play-by-play account of a ball game. For me, more subtle and emotion laden dialog, more in depth charcater development would have made the story sizzle. Yes, that's a personal view; it may not hold for others.