All Comments on 'True Love Found'

Your writing style focusses a lot on the events leading up to the coupling, which is all very well and good, but may I suggest you provide a bit more detail about the man taking control of Silas? The fucking and everything was hot, but it would make the story much better in my opinion if you focused on the sex act itself as much as you did on the events leading up to it.

All in all, a great story. I look forward to reading more!

This is s sad and pitiful story.