by jtoughkat
my step dad used to beat my mother when I was young, so I relate very well with the rage to prevent this type of life from happening ever again in my life
thank God that prick died savagely ... he deserved it; what a coward.. great start
I have no problems reading this. It was as if I am watching a movie :)
I don't care which gender it is that's the aggressor, I hate it.
Honestly speaking, your grammar needs work. you used so many unnecessary words it made it hard for me to continue reading, some words could have been a conjoined and what not. but yeah. That's just my opinion
Very good, brought back memories for me. I was slap once by an ex, however, he was the one who did the bleeding. Rage knows no limit, or size differance. I look foward to more of your stories.
I neva thot my attempt would be so received, thank u fo yo feedback and comments. i'll be posting the 2nd chapter by the end of the day. Hop u enjoy it
His growling when they kissed, should have alerted me. I cannot wait for the next chapter.
Now that was a twist I didn't see coming. Just WOW can't wait for more.
Oh my goodness! I felt every emotion that poured through this chapter. It would be so cool if one of those wolves is Trev and he is her mate. Once she recovers she will need some serious therapy, she doesn't know her self worth.
UM...please may I have some MORE of what you are serving?! Because this story is HOT, HOT, HOT!
Where have you been? Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
PS can you give me heads up when the next one is coming out, need to get my pop corn ready for it. Yippee
Your story seems intriguing... Ray is a WOLF!!! I love it. More, please and longer. LOL!!