All Comments on 'Turn of a Hired Gun'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Nice!

More please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

Amazing! I loved that.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Amazing!

But where's the rater?

Continue please :)

lancewmlancewmabout 14 years ago
Nicely done!!

Well written and to the point (of the pistol). LOL.

angel_hunniangel_hunniabout 14 years ago
liked it!

Please keep going with this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Excellent

keep writing

SecretFantasy69SecretFantasy69about 14 years ago
Yes!

Love it! Dont know where I stand on either men, but Roman's definitely interesting so far. Would love to see more of Chase in the next chapter. Great story.

ChoclatKizzChoclatKizzabout 14 years ago
5 Stars

Whether you wrote this as a stand alone story or have plans on continuing it as a series, it was refreshing and well written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Wow!

Excellent. Excellent. Excellent. Great story. Please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Great Story

I enjoyed the story. I hope that there will be more. Does dude get shot? Thanks

grunabonagrunabonaabout 14 years ago
*****

Well written.

mariasmdmariasmdabout 14 years ago
wow

well done. so glad this guy got what he had coming.

Sammy1on1Sammy1on1almost 14 years ago
Great Story

This was a really great short, I'm hoping that you will continue it. Would love to know what happens next.

LilMami07LilMami07almost 14 years ago

loved it!! **lilmami07**

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
why don't you continue

I need more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
This was sssssooooooo good!

I hoped that there's more to this story. Excellento!!!

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 10 years ago

Wow lol what a twist loved it

swear_toobobswear_toobobalmost 10 years ago
OMG never laughed so hard

That's what the slimy bastard gets I hope they scare him shitless but don't kill him but if they do he brought it on himself.

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