All Comments on 'Turn of a Hired Gun'

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swear_toobobswear_toobobalmost 10 years ago
OMG never laughed so hard

That's what the slimy bastard gets I hope they scare him shitless but don't kill him but if they do he brought it on himself.

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 10 years ago

Wow lol what a twist loved it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
This was sssssooooooo good!

I hoped that there's more to this story. Excellento!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
why don't you continue

I need more.

LilMami07LilMami07almost 14 years ago

loved it!! **lilmami07**

Sammy1on1Sammy1on1about 14 years ago
Great Story

This was a really great short, I'm hoping that you will continue it. Would love to know what happens next.

mariasmdmariasmdabout 14 years ago
wow

well done. so glad this guy got what he had coming.

grunabonagrunabonaabout 14 years ago
*****

Well written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Great Story

I enjoyed the story. I hope that there will be more. Does dude get shot? Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Wow!

Excellent. Excellent. Excellent. Great story. Please keep writing.

ChoclatKizzChoclatKizzabout 14 years ago
5 Stars

Whether you wrote this as a stand alone story or have plans on continuing it as a series, it was refreshing and well written.

SecretFantasy69SecretFantasy69about 14 years ago
Yes!

Love it! Dont know where I stand on either men, but Roman's definitely interesting so far. Would love to see more of Chase in the next chapter. Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Excellent

keep writing

angel_hunniangel_hunniabout 14 years ago
liked it!

Please keep going with this story

lancewmlancewmabout 14 years ago
Nicely done!!

Well written and to the point (of the pistol). LOL.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Amazing!

But where's the rater?

Continue please :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

Amazing! I loved that.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Nice!

More please!

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