All Comments on 'Turning Japanese'

this is really good story and i hope ther will be part 2

Hope you continue the story. I almost didn't read it because I prefer more dialogue. Don't know if you can incorporate more into your writing, but I would like it better. Keep up the good work.

I thought about the issue of dialogue alot when I was writing this story, but whenever I tried to add more it just didn't seem right, especially due to the memoir style of the piece. Certainly not without writing alot of it in Japanese anyway. As for a part 2, I think there will be another, and possibly more, but I have to mull through it a bit and see if there is anything in my writing style I would like to change first. Possibly find a way to incorporate more dialog without losing my descriptive nature...once again thanks for the comments.

Oh wow,that was good. For some reason I was expecting a string of other chapters to read after this one! Doing mom again, doing mom anal while everyones gone for the dat, doing sister who has been listening in, then sneakily watching them fuck in jealousy and envy, girl cousins and/or sisters friends spending the night and hearing/seeing him banging mom for long stretches and planning on doing him, moms sister(s) hearing the tale and cornering him, neighborhood ladies gossip-mongering drawing other married/widowed women to him, etc!

Well now you have some freebee material ideas ;)

Write on! M@

The story is perfect. There should not be a part two. As with most things inJapanese culture more isn’t always better. 1954Hall.

Great Love Story