by regularguy13
Thanks, an unusual wrinkle. I enjoyed the happy/sad moment.
That was sill, confused and not in charactor with the rest of the series.
It is always hard to vote and comment on a thread story like this as I tend to read compulsively from one chapter to the next.. but I just had to take a break and say . wow... what a wonderful series.. so engrossing, so beautiful, so hot! and this chapter was just that little bit more superb!!! now on to chapt 20!!
You threw a twist in that would never had been expected. Good writing. It was intense!!