All Comments on 'Twisted Radio'

by DragAngel

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hopkinscmhopkinscmover 13 years ago
Didn't read it...

Sorry didn't even read it but the first thought I had when I read the title was Korn's song Twisted Transitor... great song...

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Nice start

Very good start for a story line. But, would be even better if you expanded it to actually tell more about the girl and the radio. I think you should possibly go further and tell what it is she gave birth to.

DragAngelDragAngelover 13 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Hops, This is inspired by the song. One of my favorites.

Anonymous, The story just didn't give me anymore. It is just a fleeting thought when I hear the song. It never develops into more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Wow

This was a good story- maybe you should make a sequel? Plus I fucking love that song! I love how you added it into the end!

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