All Comments on 'Twisted Summer'

One of the best I have ever read on here in 10 years!

11/10!

Outside of a stray doubt the author is actually his stated age ( he writes too well & doesn't use modern vernacular for that peer group)- it is certain this story has' the goods'. There's teasing, flirting , initial fear & denial paced and placed carefully & with skill leading to the inevitable. Full marks 5/5

I thought it was great. I would have liked a little more between the brother and sister at the end, but it was still great.

Not that they will need it when sis shows up for, Labor day, Halloween, Thanksgiving, Christmas, etc.

Fuck I love your writing!!!

Great!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Well written, excellent character development, plausible story line, and great sex scenes. I'll look for more stories written by this author.

You have good insight and revealing emotions. Should write about the times peeping sister and panty play. In right circumstances sis will give you a hj. Good luck

I think that's the first time I've ever given a 5 to a story without a lot of descriptive oral sex. I've read a lot of incest, it's my favorite. but this was so dirty for some reason. This is the first time I've read any of your stuff, but won't be the last.

...I'd love to see a follow up.

Loved the story...great way of building up to a climax

I wish this was a longer story!

You won't hurt my feelings with a few more chapters maybe have him knock her up.

Between the siblings, but for a short, self-contained one-off, this story is pretty good.

GOD, man your stories are just awesome, they always feel sooooooooo real.

I don't know but so slow, so real and i am just struck with so much awe right now that i can't even write and express my feelings properly

A role player and someone to facilitate him getting his sister as well. I am sure there will be 3somes and maybe 4somes in their futures.

Talk about hard as nails, damn that story was just one of the best ever ive resd on here 5*

This has been pure enjoyment reading your story, I honestly believe this could really take place, in this day and age we live in. You are a master writer I suspect.

Good premise.

But too much back story and not enough sex with details, details, details.

Sex just seems to start and then finish much too soon.

Three stars.

I absolutely loved it. But I would have enjoyed more girl on girl action and more of the sibling love. It needs to be twice as long. As it stands, it was just a tease. 😜

There's a strong possibility that I have read this one before now. I'll have to cull back through the comments and see what I might have said before. I know that I have grown far more critical in the past year and I'm not ashamed to admit it.