All Comments on 'Two Birds'

I was a little disappointed that they did not get any further in the first chapter. The story is good so far, but we readers have to be enticed into reading the next chapter when it appears. Hopefully we shall then find out what Cathy had under her short skirt.

It is plain why the woman is seeking attention and she really is attractive in the story on several fronts, but the guy comes off as a shallow cheater. Except for knowing glances which make her feel good, there is no explanation why this hot woman would want him. His character needs to be explored and his wife's too.

a bit slow for a common tale.

Thank you. tom anon

He divorced the bitch and moved back to the big city without her. Because who would stay married to a slut? Stupid story

This is a real derp of a story.

The phrase epic fail comes to mind.

Great fantasy, I have often been to company events and seen co workers of my wife that I would love to f*CK, but in the real world that would require bigger balls than I actually have, and I really do want to keep the ones I've got.

What a singularly unpleasant character the MC is! What on earth has his wife done to deserve this level of contempt and disrespect? I hope she catches the sleazeball and wears his gonads as earrings! JR