All Comments on 'Two Bits of Punishment'

by littlemissjen

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writedoctorwritedoctoralmost 15 years ago
Accurate....

lmj allows us to peer into her submissive side, the real thing. Most of us writing pure fiction or even stories with a semblance of reality can't match this accurate account of her very personal lifestyle.

Well written and lj strips away the veneer to view her inner self, her private thoughts.

Lovely and stylish girl.

Kiss on your cheek.....

HubeeHubeealmost 15 years ago
Excellent short story 'form'

A horny story and an excellent 'zinger' ending

lance gtlance gtalmost 15 years ago
Always a pleasure!

I love your stories and your descriptive telling. It would be a pleasure to be your Dom and treat you to all the joys of serving me. I await your magical fingers to finish relaying yet another saga of your sub-life for me to read.

Forever a fan, Lance

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