All Comments on 'Two More Parties That Suck'

I would suggest that you continue this as a series. Also, may I suggest that you separate your writing into paragraphs?

Swede

I hope you have a series in mind. Please don't leave us hanging...that would be cruel.

Jack

Wish you would have her suck someones blood from the vein in a cock! dying while cumming, all time high!! Would be cool if you knew it, but couldnt stop it because it felt so good.

The title did not fit, ( I thought) but I loved it, please write more. Does Brett figure out what happens, was he awake dureing, Will he have a feelings for Val? Will Val have feelings for Brett?

really erotic

You have a possible huge winner with your story. I like the depth you gave them, with the possibility for more as the story progresses. Looking forward to more. Thanks.