Two More Parties That Suck

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She woke up hours later feeling his hand stroking her hair. Brett had woken before her and was tenderly stroking her hair with his good arm. Valerie felt a bit guilty about what she'd done in light of the endless kindness he'd shown her. She looked up to see him gazing down at her.

"Good morning Valerie."

"Thank you for helping me" was all she could say as all he'd done went through her mind.

"No one gets left behind" he said while smiling at her.

"Giving me your blood was above and beyond the call of your duty. You don't look good" she replied. He looked very pail from his blood loss and the impact of the entire ordeal. He appeared to be in substantial pain. Valerie knew he'd need her help to get back to friendly territory. She knew too that the night before, this man had earned her loyalty by saving her from the unknown death that faces vampires.

"Everyone has different perceptions of duty" he said as he got up and made preparations to get them home.

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Sorry this was slow, but I was going for more than strip, thrust, grunt, nap. I encourage any constructive comments either pro or con.

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Midge99Midge99over 3 years ago
Good story.

You have a possible huge winner with your story. I like the depth you gave them, with the possibility for more as the story progresses. Looking forward to more. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
More please!!!

The title did not fit, ( I thought) but I loved it, please write more. Does Brett figure out what happens, was he awake dureing, Will he have a feelings for Val? Will Val have feelings for Brett?

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great. i loved it

Wish you would have her suck someones blood from the vein in a cock! dying while cumming, all time high!! Would be cool if you knew it, but couldnt stop it because it felt so good.

FlpantherFlpantherover 17 years ago
More...Please

I hope you have a series in mind. Please don't leave us hanging...that would be cruel.

Jack

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