All Comments on 'Two Pregnant Moms - and Sis?'

you should have the women having sex when billy came back

Scouries, I'm not sure how you do it, experience vivid imagination or whatever, but you write some of the finest stories I've ever read. Please keep those fingers limber and start another one.

loved it

you should have had some pregnant sex

Another great fun story Jim! Thanks to your writing I am getting to enjoy incest stories more and more. What about a sequel and what happened to poor old dad? Pete.

You put The End. but is it really finished? What does dad do mover in tooo, does chrissey bring home a sexy professor

male or female, perhaps Billy has a gay streak in him. Do billys friends come over still. Vanessa pregnant? does she do all the girls at a great pool party...

Witty Willy

Way To Go Billy

Another masterpiece, Jim. You seem to have an extremely acive imagination, and the patience to provide all the detailed steps. Bravo!

Michael

That is a great story if it wasnt for politics in the US i think there would be a lot of guys would love to get there sisters or moms in there bed Billy better keep alot of those little blue pills handy with three wifes he is gonna need them.

Pat

Atlanta,Ga

It is rare to find good porn & good writing in the same text.You are special in this regard. Keep it up, so to speak.

The best story of the week...at the end of March..

Thanks for the post...

scouries. A thoroughly hot and enjoyable read. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Loved every bit of the story

Where is the second one already? One of the best stories i have ever read so far.

Enjoyed the story as it is different to anything else that I have read. If it were true, it wouldn't be long before he wore his prick out.

This was a very good story i hope to read more from you.

Hey.. Great story as always.. but seems to me that needs a second part or parts elaborated on..and as usual waiting for other stories..

great story make a part 2.

it has to be the best one yet hope you finish the story

It was the most riverting story i have read in Literotica for quite a while now. Story line was refreshing and the way it was wrote, simply SEXY. This story gets my BEST EROTIC STORY vote.

from AL.

You are always reliably one of the best writers on this site and others where your stories appear. This tale was really great. I do think it cries out for a sequel. Thanks for sharing you real talent and your amazing imagination with us all.

It's amazing at how full of yourself you are.

I like your story, but I don't want a sequel, I really don't give a damn about Billy's Father.

echo everyone else. totally great story and surprise ending.. when is second story?????

great story...can't wait for you to write a sequel

see above

Why don't these stupid people just read the story and injoy it,I did ,thank you.

You've done it again this was another great sorry.....keep it up....

BUT YOU ARE ONE OF THE MASTERS OF FANTASY

I enjoyed the story. But I guess, a sequel to it might finish the surprise ending you've given.

Mr.Scouries, I think you have outdone yourself with this one. This probably is the hottest story I have read from you.

You have truly brought erotic writing to a new pleatau.

Thank you from a very grateful fan.

I love this story. I've read it 3 times now. The devolpment of the Mother/Son relation wasn't played out enough is the only thing.

Please write more stories!!!

Mr. Scouries, you scored another touchdown! I knew that Billy's father was a man without honor when it came to women, but I did not expect your Twilight Zoneian twist at the end of your story!

Also, gotta hand props to Billy! His biological mother, his stepmom, and his sister all having his baby! And possibly getting Sophia to do the same! Also neither of those women showing any hatred toward one another ! Let's hope when Sophia becomes the newest member of Billy's harem, she doesn't have a mean streak in her body!

Do a folow up. Eric needs to nurse all three and find out why Kat left his dad.

Very good story mus needed more sex

Not sexy, nor was it "hot",,, this story hardly kept my interest. It had a fair build-up, then a big let-down. Thanks for trying,,,,,

I bow for so much splendor

I only read 2 stories from you but they were A-M-A-Z-I-N-G

They were also actual erotic stories with a nice build up and an actual story. Not the type you see a lot : the WHAM BAM thankyou Ma'am -Style.

Keep up the good work. You have found yourself a Fan

It was an enjoyable read with a back story. Your style is very interesting and I can't wait to read your other stories.

The action sequences are reduced to less than 5 sentences almost, it ended sort of quick and out of nowhere. Still a nice read, love to see more

Excellent but rather hurriedly done , particularly the better half.

Absolutely loved it. One of the best in composition and context. Very very well done. Keep it going.

JJP

in a good way that was good

The ending was great. Caught me off guard when Kat moved in with them. You need to do another chapter about Dad's reaction when he finds out who the daddy is. Great story.

This is definetely my favourite story on the site. WANT MORE!

GREAT READ MATE

story, Jim, and I echo one of the other reviewers in encouraging you to come back with a sequel on Dad's reactions to his son's fathering all three babies! I have enjoyed all of your library that I have read, but I do have one "small" critique for this story; I think it should read "clitoral or clitorean" erection, not clitoric erection, minor, I admit, but germane to a comfortable reading for any discriminating reader. doleke@sbcglobal.net

Wow loved it the ending got me though are u goin to add more to it wife kat moving and why

it is Awesome. bring out a sequel with Billy raising the 3 girls & maybe more!!!

awesome loved every minute

3 baby girls to put through college, all at the same time, this should scare him to death..the story was interesting. the plot was fine, the sexual part was lacking..meaning for all 3 of them there was no foreplay, just wham bam..however Jim don't stop writing..your on to something here

I think the plot was well done, the mind games were pretty good, and the premis was excellent. It was lacking in the sex deparment, in both language and description but all in all a good read

What did Billy's father think about Billy knocking up his wife, ex-wife and daughter? Does Billy go on to fuck and knock up his daughters, too? Is Kat going to move in and live naked with the other women and their daughters? Me thinks that Billy is going to be wondering around naked soon with his cock always soft from sperming all his women?

You could have described the sex acts and seducing a little better but this story was definitely erotic.

This is the most fascinating story I have read in along long time And I am 60 years young. Very well crafted. Thank You for sharing it. Thank you.

Popjoe

Pleasant arousing read. Could have been shortened. Would have gone into a bit more erotic detail of the lovemaking. Perhaps you could do a follow up and have the 3 woman all making love, sharing the creamy bounty of their lactating breasts and the nectar of their gorgeous hairy pussies. Good premise though

kjhbkjb

great entertaining story ..

thanks

Sunny

it was okay.

was a little lengthy.

the ending wasn't all that great.

there needed to be more descriptive writing about the sexual acts...

but keep writing. you're definitely heading in the right direction!

Mr. Scouries,

You are a terrific writer; among the best in any genre. I only wish you would include a bit of anal sex in your incest stories. It would add something for many readers, I think.

Best,

Al

Sugarland, TX

i would like to know what he told his father and what happen after words

Well I liked the story, even if it is quite long, but I would have liked to read more on the sex act rather than the story. I hope in future you add more spice like anal and oral sex in your stories.

A good plot and not rushed at all. had me hooked. A large suspenseful ending.

Good Work

Mr. Scouries, you are amazing! Your imagination is as fertile as...well, as fertile as your hero Billy's balls! In Billy-boy you've created an icon and a model for all actual and would-be family fuckers everywhere! Here is a good looking young lad who is as cocky as they come! He decides not only to shove his big dick up the twats of his nearest and dearest family females, but very deliberately to fuck babies up their cunts as well! There's his dear sister's cunt, which she offers up to him. But sweetest of all his step-Mom, newly married to Billy's Dad. Billy gets a special kick out of putting horns on his father's head as, unbeknownst to old Dad, he blows his potent balls up his new wife's fuckhole! But there's one twat that Billy treasures above all others and one womb that he just has to impregnate--the cunt and the womb he came out of--his own mother's! Billy's big fat prick--all the family cunts attest to that!--finds its coziest home up the twats of the mothers of his new babies!

Abit long but good stuff. Not chessy or overloaded on sex. Nice development of storyline. Nice to see a good story instead of opening, sex,sex,sex,sex end

.......Never know in advance the outcomes of your stories....but one thing is for sure....they are all ....are good.......i sure enjoy your writings...thank you so much...

Good flow after you suspend dis-belief.

gud work mate

brillant story

Great beginning, you are a wonderful story teller. It seems there's a lot more to tell here. I hope others urge you to continue this story: you need to feel some compulsion to go onward.

I was both horny and laughing- Thank you

damn this pussy was soo wet. loved it lots

wet wet wet

wow... Holy pig...you r good.

cheers.

Can you please continue this Storie, im so hooket on this storieline and i want to know what happend next.

Very erotic. This just goes to show that a shooting cock can develop more than one baby in more than one woman. Maybe some of these babies can also grow into fertile daughters that can also be knocked up in the future?

wow,this is more like it man. loved it,never been as hard in my life.my missis suffered no end because of this story, lets have more ,more ,more and even more

Another entertaining story. Really creative. Although strangely there's actually not a huge amount of sex in these stories.

more explisit sex talk and sex action required man.

good idea

Once again, thank you for your stories. I'm reading through them 2 or more a day. This one has been one of my favorites so far. I'll keep reading, that's for sure!

Thanks again

wow this was different and interesting. certainly held my interest to the end

This was a really good story cant wait to read more

LOVED IT. NEED A FOLLOW-UP OF THE FATHER SON DISCUSSION OND MORE LADIES.

Please consider continuing this story. What caused Kat to choose to join Billy, his mom & sister? Was the reason for his dad not getting his wives pregnant that he had secretly gotten a vaectomy? What did the women talk about that convinced mom & sis to have Kat join the family. I hope that I can look forward to answers to these and other questions.

there has to be more ...you can not get the reader involved and leave it with nothing to follow...it is an awesome story definitely looking forward to the rest of it

Excellent story - nice slow build up to where Billy fucks his Mum, his Stepmum and his sister - what a lucky boy! What happened later though? I think Billy should have fucked both his Mums in front of his Dad just to piss him off.

Abso-Fucking-lutely Crazy

Interesting Read

You'r OUT of your DAMN MIND!

Erotic

Thats all, I'v run out of words.

Would like to know an ending for this story. The story is sooo HOTTTTTTTT!!! Would like to see what happens with Vanessa and more of why dad couldn't have more kids. Please write more to story!!!!!!!!!!1

The story overall is a good base for a longer story from start to finish. In between chapters or paragraphs there is too much skipped. Its a good read but not grabbing for attention, also it could be much more sensual.

Good effort man and thanks for the read.

Scouries, Sir. I have read and greatly liked your stories over the years. That being said I feel the standard form of rising action, moment of truth, and conclusion, needs to be broken for you to move to the next level. I suggest the more natural process of incident. For that is how our lives unfold. Thanks for all the hours of enjoyment, and I hope you keep writing for this venue, Buzz.

This ended alittle to soon! It needs a sequel!!! GREAT JOB!!!

I enjoyed this story, but not as much as a few others of yours I have read. Still, you got the talent. You know how to write erotically, without it being smut. I have to say this one felt a little rushed towards the end. Loved the build up at the beginning.

Keep writing I enjoyed the story line and the way you presented it. Great read so keep going.

What a sick, twisted story...I loved it! LOL! Damn, some thoughts are best left unannounced...but, then, there wouldn't be any feedback. That kid (Billy) has to be the "luckiest man on the face of the oith", to paraphrase Lou Gehrig.

Loved it, but skipped over so many things that you could have "fleshed" out. Write a longer one :)

The end was a little rushed, but overall good reading maybe a sequel to flesh it out.

Will there be a sequel? I really wish it had been longer. Perhaps describe the pregnant sex, that's always been a small fetish of mine. And of course I'd have enjoyed some milk. Overall, though, another 5-star performance from you.

You had a great idea. Seducing 3 women, impregnating them and marrying them to billy. It's a good story and you started it well. There is a plot to seduce them but all of a sudden, he slept with his mother, fucked his step-mother and made love to his sister. It's too easy, where is the temptation, the guilt? It's a taboo but they dive in without thinking twice.

I would appreciate if he seduced the women one by one and we see them slowly stop resisting.

This story has everything needed to be defined as a classic. I think this story will be impossible to surpass and I hope the author won't give up if he is unable to match the quality of this fantasy. Perhaps an epilogue.............

One very good story in the word's of siskel n ebert 5 thumb's up

Rubbish....cant even get a hardon

bring it on!, great theme, I cannot get enough of these stories. I'm jealous because these relationships were not on my horizon. more please.

Billy is a better man than I am, unfortunately.

Joe

Hope Billy didn't just throw her over. She deserved lots of loving too.