All Comments on 'Two Short Encounters'

Well written short.

I did wish that it was a bit longer simply so I could get a feel for the people. I assume that you are limiting yourself to a certain length so I'm not complaining just explaining.

I'm not just referring to this piece, but your writing in general and overall; you're a talented writer. What I particularly enjoy is the way in which you draw the reader in until it seems as if we are almost sitting on your lap, well I can but hope.

I am starting to write for Lit and hopefully I can persuade you to read my stuff as it gets on the site. More importantly though is how can I persuade you to reply, so that we can keep in touch? Any suggestions please send to london_james2010@yahoo.co.uk

Thanks a lot and best of luck

James