by Mark2
Let your mind wander wher it may but hurry up and finish this story
try and keep the names of your characters in line with the story......
otherwise a Excellent STORY!!!!!!!!
That one had me off of my seat. You're doing even better with the 2nd one. Keep it up, I know you can do it!
all of your above ideas plus gwen and pru getting together for the enjoyment of unca b...then possibly a real twist pru gets the better of her father by having wild sex with both gwen and unca b while he is forced to watch tied to a chair...i have a nasty imagination hahahahahaha
we have a story about gwen and pru who and when did beth come into this?? the story is fine though but just wondered!
You interchanged Gwens name to Beth on a few occasions. It was distracting. That's all. :) now I need to continue reading....