by davetoy69
Hot! Wish instead of 'he said, he asked' you had writen a dialogue.
Can't wait for more, thanks.
and I'm sorry for all the time I wasted.
This is a great series. Great subject and well written.
Good honest 5 star pornography.
First I have read too. Can't wait to read the rest. Please keep this series going. I'd love to see this made as a movie.
Loved the part where his uncle encouraged his to stroke his cock. UUUUUUUM Good!
Super hot, but would be vastly improved if dialogue was used versus "he said/he did" .
That would definitely pull it to a 5* even with how short it is.