All Comments on 'Unconventional Plans'

I hate when you guys do this why dont you continue with this good story jazzysoul i liked where youre going with this story its about being a prisoner of war in Iraq please continue .

Pat

Lemme get this straight, violent death begets violent death! So if drunks kill my girlfriend, I can go kill someone else till they kill me. I guess this is better than suicide by cop, at least he gives his death the illusion of meaning something.

was never my intention to portray this person as a reasonable sound thinking person. Of course his line of action is ridiculous, but he's not thinking on anything but raw emotion and depression.

Not making a statement here, just telling a story that came to me one day. *shrugs* Nothing more, Nothing Less.

Jazzysoul

edit: apparantly I have to rate it if I leave a comment. Not trying to stack the deck. lol

<p>It'll find its way to the bottom all by itself. The truth is, this isn't a story. It isn't any PART of a story and, because of that, it won't get good ratings.</p>

<p>I don't know what training you have in writing, but this collection of random thoughts does not constitute a story. A story has a rhythm to it, rises and falls in the intensity of emotions and action. All you've done is play a funeral dirge. Not very attractive.</p>

<p>Ron123XYZ@foreveranonymous.naturally</p>

Killing or death can never be entertaining except for the few weirdos.<P>

Here you took too much pleasure in his sickness. Why is that?<P>

One can sense that you are capable of more than this absurdity.

The story was short but very powerful. The writing was good. Looking foward to more.

It amazes me that you all deny the political content of this article and only see depression and violence.