All Comments on 'Under the Christmas Tree'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Another MASTURBATOR who thinks that that makes him

a MASTER

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Too short.

It felt you were just building up and then *wham!* Too fast of an ending. Please give more detail and build up on the tension. Don't just glaze over the details.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

short but itleft me hot & teased liketthe girl in the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Too Short

Ended way too suddenly

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