All Comments on 'Under the Christmas Tree'

by sugarfiend05

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Too Short

Ended way too suddenly

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago

short but itleft me hot & teased liketthe girl in the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Too short.

It felt you were just building up and then *wham!* Too fast of an ending. Please give more detail and build up on the tension. Don't just glaze over the details.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Another MASTURBATOR who thinks that that makes him

a MASTER

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