All Comments on 'Undetermined Boundaries Ch. 04'

I really like where this story is going...I'm always a sucker for a "white knight." Hurry and update soon, put me out of my misery.

hi.. i really liked ur story.. very interesting start.. i have been waiting for a long time for ur nxt chapter.. please hurry up..

I just wanna say thank you, I think your the first author I've seen that has responded to people's negative crap the way I always do when I read it. If you can't be a constructive critic keep it to yourself. If you think you can do better, please try, then see what it's like to have people you don't know be nasty for no particular reason. I like the story, yeah there's some grammatical stuff here and there but nothing that detracts from the story.

Im dying of anticipation here...I love your story and I need more...please hurry!!!!

depressed that you're not continuing the story. It's such a good one!

I'd definitly enjoy a 5th chapter - and of course more!

The chars are great, your way with the words is most enjoyable and well written - it all comes to live easily!

Please continue the story if you got a few minutes left!

Well Breezy115,

After two years it is evident that you're just another A&% H*%# that publishes part of a story and then walks away.

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<I>-- srgeek --</I>

great story.... c'mon.... hangin on the edge here...

Because you didn't finish it. You quit writing six years ago. At least finish what you start.

Your characters are too stupid too live. Just crawl into a hole and disappear like all the other quitters.

Damn. Another unfinished story. Too bad, this one had potential.