All Comments on 'Undetermined Boundaries'

great start. is there a chapter 2?

More please!!! Great start and I can't wait to read where these two will go. Thanks much and keep up the great work...

Cheers...

Breezy,

This is a very good first story. I really hope you run with it and have a few more chapters. I like the "feel" of the characters and the story line, so have fun with it. I really enjoy making good comments to a new writer, when they earn it. You have done well and I look forward to future stories.

Really enjoyed your story. I hope there will be more chapters, and will be looking for them.

...no, for real. you lost me at the part where meagan gets hit by a car, is unconscious, then wakes up and carries on an intelligent, spunky conversation with the hot man who hit her. very romanticist.