All Comments on 'Unethical Conduct'

The story line and plot were good- the mind control part was a bit forced- but good plot and action- overall.

L.

I really enjoyed the story, a bit long but worth it in the end(double entendre intential). My tail got all wet and I had to find my lover(husband) to help me. After he read it we agreed we would try the last scene ourselves. It really turns one on to have no control over the action. He did me twice, then untied me and we went to bed and awoke to do it again, same manner. I loved the story and the ideas it gave us.

but worth the risk. Psyching out the reader is sometimes a very, very good thing! Wish you were still writing -- ah well, maybe later. Take care -- hcl