All Comments on 'Unexpected Poker Night'

Please be gone for a longer time now

Well done. Ignore the ignorant as they know not what you write. This stands alone well but the people could come back in another story - do not be away so long again.

You obviously spent lots of time writing this story. Days, maybe? Couldn't you have spent one more day editing the story down to a reasonable size?

I'll give you some hints: When writing erotica, keep your politics out. Nobody cares about some 1980s punk bands that have no relevance to the story. Why write that you played "bullshit"? Eliminate all this extraneous crap and you might have a decent story. It would certainly be a more readable story.

Until then, sorry, I give you low marks and consider this story a waste of time.

This story had lots of potential... Unfortunately, you didn't use a good editor who would have compressed this story to a more readable length. Too long and consequently boring in spots.

What a great story. It was long, but not dull. I think Christi should have begged more, harder

I think that there is nothing wrong with the length. Good story. I enjoyed it.

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