All Comments on 'Unfulfilled? Not Anymore! Ch. 03'

Wonder how Hunter is going to distract his parents from seeing Danni... and Hunter's ex-wife is a manipulative bitch and what if she's pregnant but with someone elses baby.

If Danni is 19 then how old is Hunter?

5 stars

Make sure the first thing he gets is a paternity test!

"Hood Twins"? BWAAAH That is hilarious. I love it. This story gets better and better, but Danni needs to be careful-- Hunter's parents may not be too open-minded. However, these curve balls make the story even more interesting. Definitely a paternity test, Katherine may not know who the baby daddy is.

Katherine needs her ass kick! Hunter should re-think his plan because if the kid is not his he is unintentionally trapping himself regardless if said baby is his or the Italian playboy. Glad Danni and Hunter came to an understanding but Hunter's parents smell like TROUBLE.

In my head Hunter is in his early 30's. Young enough to change and be flexible in his llfe but old enough to have certain level of maturity. He will need both of those aspects with all the stuff swirling around in the air.

Remember that's the reason she hopes it doesn't come early - because it would really be obvious that Hunter wasn't the one who impregnated her. He wouldn't even need to bother with a paternity test. Women like Katherine are just silly and shallow. She can make her own money and take care of herself, but she wants to live the luxury country club life. What good is that in general, but especially if you're not in it for love? I just do not get it. Why can't she see what a miserable existence that is?

boy meets girl, boy loses girl, boy gets girl back - a real sweet story for all who love romance.

Don't make me wait for the next installment. I want more...

MORE!!!

tables are going to turn on his ex-wife due to the baby Not being his. They shall make a good couple, his mother is going to feel so small when the Italian baby arrives...More

Hunter knows that his soon to be ex-wife is pregnant with another man's child.

Hunter knows he loves Danni heart and soul.

Hunter knows the wisdom of keeping silent like a wild jungle cat until time to pounce.

Hunter knows Danni cares about him more than she's saying.

The way she responds to his loving speaks volumes.

Now as soon as you can, the next chapter please...............very nice

I can't wait to see where this is going. Love the story.

Five.

Update! Update! Update!

to come back and finish! I, like so many others are HOOKED! Wonderful read and a great start. PLEASE COME BACK

Thank you for a lovely story...sorry to read about your mom and I hope she's doing well. Looking forward to reading the rest of Dani's and Hunter's story :)

Hunter's wife has a lot of nerve. I can totally understand Danni not wanting to be caught in the middle. Hunter has to see it from Danni's perspective. Now the witch has involved his parents. This is going to be interesting. I swear if I was Danni I would not come out until Hunter's father left. Then I would leave. Not because I was mad, but because Hunter needs to get unresolved issues taken care of. Danni does not need the drama that his wife is going to bring and now potentially his parents. I do feel bad for Hunter, but he has a little too much going on. More please, when you can!

K I need to know what happens next. C'mon I'm dying here

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