All Comments on 'Unsichtbarkeit'

I for one would like to see where it goes.

got me hooked..got to see how it ends

Please continue this story

I think it shows a very good imagination and a sense of humor. Admittedly a sorta sick sense of humor but that can be a good thing, too.

I hope you continue this. I'm suprised he hasn't used his new potions to improve his own sex life. Great story, but he should be doing someone as well. Maybe his mom and sister or the hot chick who lives across the street. Voyeurism is all well and good, but let's face it, dipping your wick is better than masturbating any day! You have a great start to a long running story line here, I hope you continue with it.

Lets do this some more. You would think he would either find a Woman for himself or Turn his Mom and Sister onto him?

HOW COULD YOU BLAME MARISSA WHEN IT WAS YOU THAT CAUSED THE DIVORCE.

IT SEEMS THAT THERE IS MORE THAN ONE AUTHOR WRITING THIS STORY.

You lost me when he went to get revenge on the woman he forced to have sex with his father. That made no sense...

Well the story is absolutely brilliant but how come he didn't have sex??? And why is he only pressing after his mum and dad??? Carry on the story though!!!

Please write the next chapter!!!

Nice unique story, but the guy has a sister and goes to college yet he's messing with his mom,dad and local mi.f instead of college girls? Rather disappointing.