All Comments on 'Untamed Passion'

Very enjoyable read.

Very touching; very good read. I'd like

to see you continue...possibly with the

2nd generation.

Very moving. Please continue with the story on David and Vanessa.

Loved the story.

I LOVED your story. Beautifully written; like those authors of time passed long ago. I could see Michael and Nakina in my head and that's the test of a wonderful story. I look forward to reading additional stories from you :-)

Kitty

Awesome, looking forward to Debra and Davids story

I meant Vanessa and Davids story

ha ha ha

Please come back and finish this story.

Please come back to finish this amazing story!

I'm not saying the ending was bad, by any means, but it was horribly abrupt and harsh. The man who had loved Nakina, made plans to marry her, all of a sudden up and married someone else while she is in a coma. It would have been better if the masked men had been real criminals, nothing to do with Michael's family, and they had killed Michael. Still awful and sad, but so much better than what you wrote.

Also,

WHERE IS THE CHILD ?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!