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With a sigh, she turned on her side and snuggled against Denis. She would have to trust that Vanessa would make the right decision with regards to David Ambrose.
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- COMMENTS
Anonymous14 days agoWhat the actual fuck man im enjoying myself to a light bit of romantic smut then boom the bastard father actually comes in and kills the relationship then the author does the fucking same
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoI'm not saying the ending was bad, by any means, but it was horribly abrupt and harsh. The man who had loved Nakina, made plans to marry her, all of a sudden up and married someone else while she is in a coma. It would have been better if the masked men had been real criminals, nothing to do with Michael's family, and they had killed Michael. Still awful and sad, but so much better than what you wrote.
Also,
WHERE IS THE CHILD ?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
EroticLitKittyalmost 15 years agoI LOVED your story. Beautifully written; like those authors of time passed long ago. I could see Michael and Nakina in my head and that's the test of a wonderful story. I look forward to reading additional stories from you :-)
Kitty
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoVery touching; very good read. I'd like
to see you continue...possibly with the
2nd generation.
