All Comments on 'UnTied'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very Nice

A nice tight little story. I'm going to have to read more of your stories. Thank You. Ronnie W.

rgraham666rgraham666over 18 years ago
Sweet and hot

Nice piece of work.

The authour did a fine job of building up the scene with a delightful minimum of words.

Well done.

don87654don87654over 18 years ago
Great

But needs more....a lot more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Waiting For The Climax

A wonderful buildup that leaves the climax to the readers imagination. Well Done.

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