All Comments on 'Unveiled Ch. 01'

Please continue this story

I'd love to read more. Thank you - 5 stars.

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There were a lot of spelling and grammatical errors that made this a hard read.

BUT...

It's nice and refreshing to see that two married people can still have a loving relationship without his CD interfering, and she turns him into a sissy then leaves him.

But we will see, with him suspecting her of an affair.

Finally, a CD story where the wife appreciates her husband's tendency to dress comfortably in the privacy of his/their own home, and he does not desire to fuck, or be fucked by men. The story has great possibilities to be very erotic in future chapters. Don't blow it by having the wife, or anyone else, degrade him in chapters yet to come. There is too much of that kind of crap on this, and other Internet sites already.

It takes a great deal of courage for a man to go to a woman's clothiong store, and find a saleslady to assist him in building his wardrobe from scratch. Definitely not the act of a wimp, or a sissy.