All Comments on 'Upstairs in the Garden'

by psychedelicmoth

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Stupid people

Do stupid things. These two are at the end of their road and ready go to their different destinations.

quietbutkinkyquietbutkinkyalmost 17 years ago
Stupid people make stupid comments

And hide behind the title 'Anonymous'. Good story and even if these people were about to head in different directions at least they can say they tried to save it and had fun doing it.

MistaRheeMistaRheealmost 17 years ago
Upstairs

You showed an interesting transition from what seemed to be a memory, to a piece of fiction. A good attempt, but you should 'step back' and scan the text to see if there are misspelled words or if the word used was similiar to one with a different meaning, but pronounced the same. Try running it past one of the site's editors, next time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Yes quet they do.

The couple described here are in stupid mode. And support of stupid people doing stupid things is ignorant.

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