by GrantLee
Wow, this was a nice update to your Using Jill story. Though I really am glad I must point out that this seventh chapter was a bit short. Although I am happy that you put in a story arc from one of my suggestions. I must say that I was worrying that you had thought of stopping to continue this story arc; because of some negative criticisms. Don't put a thought to these people! Many forget that this site is about erotic fantasies. People who blur the line between reality and fantasy should not presume to criticize talented writers as yourself Grant. I hope this will not be the last I get to read of Using Jill!! Thanks and please keep up the good work!!
Very hot series and well written. Really enjoyed it and look forward to more of your work.
About Damn Time someone fucked that ass! I would have taken it in chapter one, two at the latest!