All Comments on 'Vacation'

Um, one would hope there is more to read as what the hell is " group sex " about that?

Great start! Please take this story and continue. I think it has more legs to it!!

May I assume from the unfinished feel of this story, and by its being placed in the 'Group Sex' category that there is more to come? I certainly hope so and will be watching for it.

I think even the gay caballeros appreciate the feminine form !

I honestly don't know why it says "group sex." It's not supposed to have that tag. Hope you all can enjoy anyway.

Lighthearted, natural dialog and a nice build to a simple story. It stands alone well enough, but leaves plenty of room for whatever the couples want to do next.

If you have plans to get the couples together in another chapter, leave it in GS. Otherwise, you might want to have it moved to Exhibitionism.

Nice job.

Excellent story, love it!

Great intro. story , don't tease the readers ! Do the right thing and let them cum with the other man's wife !!!

Had a very similar experience, and I still get excited thinking about it