by veronica_james
Enjoyed your story, but it might be more at home in Erotic Couplings.
I posted the pre-polished version. Instead of summer sun, it was supposed to say that "she couldn't enjoy the first bit of sun the city had seen in weeks" since obviously it's not sunny in February. Oh well, can't catch everything. I'm so glad you enjoy my work! Everyone's comments have really boosted my creativity and desire to write. Love you guys!
and knew it would be good. Thanks. Looking forward to your next....