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mBrowabout 13 years agoNice fantasy
Fun for us guys, but it seems a bit sophomoric, maybe because it's so brief. Maybe we're looking for a sequel to complete our fantasies.
SchlockTheMonkeyabout 13 years agoSloppy and cliche
Tenses keep flipping, poor word choice (hazy eyes? seriously?), and a thoroughly cliche plot. The very platonic ideal of fail.
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