All Comments on 'Vampire Not So Cold'

Very interesting story. Could have gone on a little longer for me gave more plot.

i loved it

Some big typos that kind of take away from the flow of the story. Other than that, it was pretty good. I definetly enjoyed it. Sweet ending, too.

I LIKED UR STORY BUT--A LITTLE CONFUSING AT THE END..U SHOULD HAVE SAID A LITTLE MORE,,GOOD SEX SCENE BUT NO BITE R ANYTHING TO LET THE VAMPIRE CHARACTER SEEM REAL R WAS ORAL SEX THE REQUIRED NOURISHMENT INSTEAD OF BLOOD..ANYWAY U COULD DO WITH A PART 2..I THINK OTHERS AND I WOULD ENJOY HEARING MORE ABOUT THIS STORY..THANKS