All Comments on 'Vampires and Lovers Ch. 07'

by Pelaam

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Contest4JenContest4Jenover 13 years ago
Yay :D

I was so happy when i saw that you had posted another story for this chapter. The love between each of the couples is just overwhelming. My cheeks always hurt from smiling after i have read your stories! Love.

Cheers :D

alexandra36alexandra36over 13 years ago
Yes!!

Me too, I was really happy to see a posting (any posting) from you and thought my heart was going to drop from excitement! LOL.

I just loved the chemistry the characters have with each other. It warms my heart how they all look out and care for each other...I can feel the emotions so clearly that I feel like I belong with their family. :) EXCELLENT work!

Btw, I also enjoyed your published e-book and thank you so much for letting me know of it. I enjoyed it tremendously although I think it was a bit short. :) Cheers!!!

willieonewillieoneover 13 years ago
Thankyou!

I feel like I've been waiting forever to read more adventures from our sexy six sluthes and this chapter lived up to my expectations. It was awesome loved every second of it! Loved that even though he was out of it he still tried to protect his pack/family.

Now you need to get cracking and write more mysteries that they can put their talents to solving.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Well worth the wait

another great edition to the series. I especially love how unselfish the characters are towards each other (re: especually delfin) and I have to admit I love the sexual scenes too. And, I can't wait to read what you dream for the guys in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
oh wow!!!!!

I love it....!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Poor David

it sems as if David cant catch a break. he gets battered in almost every chaptered. good thing gabriel is there to make it all better. good chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
loved it

absolutely loved it, great to see a new chapter

p.s.i would really love to see a chapter dedicated to gabriel and david. they are my favorite couple. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
want more

story about gabriel and david please loved this

willieonewillieoneabout 13 years ago

I love how Gabriel is always so protective of Wyl he seems to love him almost as much as his mate. It is so funny when he grabs him and Vincent ends up snuggling up behind his mate so that Gabriel can still hold him. LOL

morgan_lynnmorgan_lynnalmost 13 years ago
Love it

OMG I love all of it. I am really looking forward to reading more. It only took me like two days to read all seven chapters. I couldnt get enough of it. Keep up the great work. I look forward to reading more from you.

darkangelrubydarkangelrubyalmost 13 years ago
wow

beautiful writing style ...great characters ....sexy...sad...funny....warm....10/10 xxxx

AsmrtkidAsmrtkidalmost 13 years ago
Speechless

These chapters are amazing! You change my perspective of gays, in a way, and added in mythological creatures! It is truly amazing, these are the best stories that I like compared to your others. I give them all 5 stars. It's just amazing

sensual_bluesensual_bluealmost 13 years ago
More Please More!!!!

I love your story and i want to read more, they are Amazing and i love these three couples and i want to see what will happen for them next

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
a la twilight

nice...was so hooked with your stories especially this one...more stories of the creatures of the night...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
OMFG

the best story ever, I love the story's and that they all have there own mates ,wishing U could write more of these please in love with your writing xxxx -s.a.m

takemeaway1272takemeaway1272over 12 years ago
This Entire Series is WONDERFUL!

I have thoroughly enjoyed all seven chapters in this series. The characters are well developed, the chapter lengths are perfect, and the stories are both original and enthralling. No doubt, this series is on my list of favorite reads, right at the top!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

i was hoping Seamus and his nymph would have a baby :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
enjoyed it

8 hours ive sat hear reading this.its 1,45am and i am fucked.... but loved it....jonathan

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66almost 12 years ago
Loved it

Just finished reading all 7 chapters and loved the story.. I hope there are more chapters to come and we find out about Delfin's little brother.... can't wait to read more of your stories

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Loved It

Just got done read Chapter 7 after reading Chapters 1 - 6 first. This story needs more chapters!!!! Thoroughly enjoyed reading this story with its many believable characters and amazing plot. Simply beautiful and so powerfully moving. The story just got better and better with each chapter.

This story would make a great book series or an anime series?!

Pelaam, please keep writing more chapters!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
SISSY

MOOOOOOORE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SO GOOOOOOOOOOD !!!!!!!!!!!!! WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTERS !!!!!!!! WHEN IS THE SERIES ????? IF IT ISN'T ONE IT MUST, MUST, MUST, MUUUUUUST BE MADE INTO ONE !!!!!!!!! OKAY ? PLEASE !!!! THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS !!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Delfin should get pregnant.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Awww...

No more???? SIGH.

BitchWhoMadBitchWhoMadover 5 years ago
5 stars

One of the BEST stories on Literoctica, shame she/he didn't finish it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Absolutely fantastic! Just finished it after 3 days of reading as I had time. However, you should write the ultimate concluding chapter! BRILLIANT writing!

CasualnagaCasualnagaover 1 year ago

Will this series continue or is it done?

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