All Comments on 'Vampiric Conquest'

for a vampire story, which it seems everyone and their dog has written, this is pretty good. Discriptive writing. The only thing I would say is that the paragrphs are awfully long, making it somewhat hard to read. Other then that, keep up the good work :)

Cool and neat story. Although with a few spelling and grammar errors, otherwise it was perfect.

Thanks WiredJ