All Comments on 'Vanessa and Veronica Ch. 09'

I was sad to see Bradford die; however, I was fascinated with all the new information, and the way things moved into a new direction. Kevyn a telepath, and if I am not mistaken Louise is an...empath and a strong one. This is good stuff!

Well done Kal, fine job excellent chapter.

Thank you!

M1

I knew that the ending of Patrick was going to be pivotal in Vanessa & Veronica! Kevyn is a telepath (as we all already knew), but her power is incredibly strong. The addition of Lousie was a great move, too! You wove everything together quite well, Kal. Now, you have more time on your hands for JUSTINE!!! While I love, love, love, the Sinclaires and their saga-that Justine has me chomping at the bit every. single. day!!!! You're amazing, Kal!

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This series can go on forever!!! Each of your characters offers layers yet to be explored. I am looking forward the only way one can with you. No use touting your former accolades when their is a unspoken promise of so much more on the horizon. Your story telling ability is indeed a gift and thank you for sharing it with the masses.

I have followed this family since it started with Etahn. must say you never disappoint. I love these characters and this story. I am so happy things worked out in the end. This was truly an amazing journey. Thank you Kalamazoo for sharing this vision with us. really enjoyed it. Normally at this point I'd be begging for more, but I am actually satisfied. And that Miss is a testament to your ability.

Thank you for a wonderful update, Kal!!

Thank you thank you thank you!!!

I have a question about Jamie - Mason and Toni's son. He was adopted by Toni and James and I thought he was human. Yet, he seems to recognize his mate the way a vampire would. Was his birth mother a vampire - or was the person she mated with a vampire, making Jamie a vampire in turn? Or did he decide to be turned into a Vampire by Mason? Really curious about that part of the story and his recognition of Victoria as his mate. Anyway, I just love how you weave these tales of the Sinclaire family. They're excellent!

I too have followed your stories and almost stopped at the first installment of "Ethan", but I'm SO glad I stayed because you have kept me entertained for a while. I hope to hear more of Louise and Nathan, especially as she's an empath. Can't wait for your future installments.

and an excellent ending to this fantastic story i am looking forward to your next installment of the sinclaire saga. Just wondering which one of the many threads you left open will you pull at next i can hardly wait to see the relationship between Jamie and Victoria flourish. I am a bit curious about Louise and Nathan.

I do not feel sorry about Bradford like some of your readers if anything wish he would of suffered more The only thing else i can say is Yes Way To go Girl hit that bastard one more time

thank you so much for sharing this wonder story

You are just the best! I really loved this story and all of the related ones. Just an amazing writer. I hope you submit other stories of the 'Sinclairs' (hint hint...Jamie/Victoria--Nathan/Louise??). Thanks for sharing your talent with us.

Thanks. You never disappoint. I love all the couples in this story.

So awesome as usual!!! I love the Sinclaire family!!

Love it!!! Keep the stories coming. I love the way you end this story but turned around and made it sweet with the wedding. I love how you let the Louise and Nathan get together. I hope Ethan and Katrina have more babies. The twins start their family. Mason and Toni have their twins. Victoria grows up and gets together with Jamie in adult way. Patrick and Kevyn get married and have babies. Keep Writing!!! Never stop because you are to great at it. Please let Justine figure that her and that man are suppose to be together really so before they found them.

I have to co-sign what everyone has stated about your amazing storytelling skills. Thanks so much for sharing and looking forward to more of the Sinclaire family saga.

Now on to the next chapter of Justine and IWLYF!!! ;)

Anjel54

it was absolutely beautiful, and in comparison to your others amazing stories i think this is one is tied with mason and ethan for my favorites written by you. anyway, cant wait til you posted another NEW story. keep up the phenomenal job you've been doing and i really hope you get your books published and printed because you deserve it

Such a wonderful story! I'm curious to know where Louise will fit in this family. Either way, you parallel along lines with JazCullen, another one of my fav authors! Good luck in all your future endavors!

I don't usually leave comments but I just wanted to say that you are such an amazing writer I love all your stories and can't wait to read what you have coming next. Keep up the excellent work.

You are a talented writer and story teller, and you never disappoint.

This was a really great ending I love how everything came together in the end. I don't know how you did it but I did feel a little sympathy for Bradford in the end, and I get the reason for Louise being there. I can't wait to see what you come up with next for this family. Is it going to be Louise and Nathan or Victoria and Jamie. Whoever it is I know its going to be great like the rest of your stories.

P.S. For the readers that love her work, this talented author does have some published work out under the Penname Yvonne Ray, look her up on Amazon to check out her Bound By Blood series and her Vampire series. I know if you like her work here you'll love those as well. So show her some love by going out a purchasing some of her work.

I just got something in my eye.

Wonderful ending, so who is next.

Thank you Kalamazoo707 for another wonderful story. It was superb, I enjoyed it very much. Well written. So what's next...Louise & Nathan? Or Jamie & Victoria? Please don't keep us waiting to long. I know, I'm sounding greedy, but your stories are addicting. Keep up the good work gal.

I love this series!!! Any plans for a story about Nathan and Louise?? Or more about the twins as married women?? Excellent job as always..

please do jamie and victoria next

I love this series and hope we get a couple more of them like Nathan and Louise and Jamie and Victoria! Just don't stop writing!

A wonderful story with non stop action and lovely romance. Do Louise and Nathan next also do Victoria and Jamie. Can't wait to read the next story.

Good writings from what I have read thus far. Keep them coming;-)

You did a great job of tiding all of the pair together. You took all of the personalities and matched them with their exact opposed together. Thank you for a great read!!!!

Bad spelling and grammar......LOL.......mine!

This was a great addition to the series and I look forward to reading more from you!

I spent the past 3 days reading Patrick and V&V stories and all I can say is WOW.

Great job.

I love your stories. I have been following the story of the Sinclaire family. I have a few queries and opinions.

Firstly, I think you have neglected Vanessa's and Luc's story. They have the initial problems about the 'being with other people' thing. But both girls have problems because of that. Then Veronica's ordeal with Bradson starts and at the end of it she and Rik grow closer because of it. At the wedding we are told about Rik's nervousness and Veronica's dealing with it. Again in Louise's story there is the confrontation between Veronica and Barb.

My point is this: in the beginning you draw attention to both girls then you solely focus on Veronica. I'd like to know more about Vanessa.

Secondly, I want to know more about the research on the Sinclaire men's anger. I want to what has caused it and why Patrick forgot about his mate and why Ethan could not recognise his mate.

Thirdly, where are the girls going to do their research and continue their work now that they live with Rik and Luc? Are they going to discontinue their research because they are mated? Have they lost all their records because their lab had been trashed?

I think Vanessa and Veronica's story is incomplete. I would like it if you wrote more and considered my points. Could you tell me what you thought of what I had to say?

Thanks

P.S. I am writing this in a number of places in number of places just in case you don't read all your comments and fanmail. :p

Umm that's it?? It seem like you left out some parts, In Louise story barb was with them at the wedding trying to flirt with Rik...

I guess it is now off to Louise's story. Thanks for making the Sinclaire's a staple in time for me.

BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO.ON TO LOUEIS STORY NEXT O MASONS WOW CAN'T WAIT

What order should I read these stories. I thought this was the second one after ethan. Please list order.

Hi... the order is as follows:Ethan, Mason, Patrick, Vanessa and Veronica, Louise and now Thorne

Thank you for the prompt response ,I love your stories are you contemplating getting published?

can't wait for Louise, Nathan and Victoria's stories

I would love to know how things are going to go with Victoria and jamie!!!