All Comments on 'Very Much Against My Will'

Very well done!

so always lock your door which she did not do...

if you wrote it I did not read it but when did he remove the tape over her mouth to wet his fingers and tape her back up???....

type-o use editor, we all need help...

she did not cum...nice, glad to not read her cumming...

man that are hot and huge cock guys date rape not break-in rape,..will he be back???....

gave you 5* because considering this was your first, which was incredible, I can't wait for your next...

Like Dwayne Johnson but not as tan. He could be his brother actually. I loled so hard at this line in the story. Like WTF?

Good job.

How can he shove fingers in her mouth when her mouth is taped?

Truly awful spelling and grammar throughout

Liked the story well enough (5 stars) but concur with other comments:

- lots of typos and he puts his fingers in her mouth without removing tape.

Here are the typos (and there are issues with missing commas and extraneous commas, but keep writing!)

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three > threw

breast > breasts (para 3)

it > a towel (para 5)

didn’t > doesn’t

ad > and

an > and

too > to

the > then

drug > dragged

corned > corner

if > of

I > it

<delete> “to” (my skin)

to > the (waist)

trashed > thrashed

but > bit

if > of

on > one

confides > confines

clot > clit

thrusted > thrust