All Comments on 'Victim Lovers Ch. 01'

I really, really liked parts of this story. Other parts confused and turned me off. Dislikes aside, the story is well-written and I'd eagerly read more submissions by this author.

Can be in many circumstances fun and erotic. This is niether. It is NOT erotic and not really where a 'LOVING' master or mistress would go. But it's your nightmare that you have created. I just hope that in 'REAL' life any partner you have would be treated better than this non-human you have created.

Is a really fucked up little story, I would like to meet you, get you down on the floor and not let you up. You don't deserve to breath the same air as me, your a very twisted little fuck.

I like the new, dark, D/s theme you're going with. I'm looking forward to more.