All Comments on 'Victoria's Blackmail Ch. 03'

by Ug

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jpalsgrjpalsgrover 12 years ago
Forced surrender

Her forced sexual surrender to Michael is a slow progression but, with each chapter she cedes more of her body. Now the drinking is becoming an escape from her situation. Take more of her body and mind in sexual surrender to the kid.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Enjoyed

There are not many stories I read as enjoyable as Victoria's Blackmail. I would like to have read several more chapters. Very well written and most enjoyable.

Nitro70652Nitro70652over 12 years ago
again

I ask again.... what is keeping her from just breaking her word to this kid? He supposedly has nothing more to "blackmail Victoria" with.

3 stars.

UgUgover 12 years agoAuthor
to Nitro

In the story, Michael still has the original photos as well as the video and photos of her giving him head in the classroom.

If she tried to break her end of the deal, she would probably run the risk of him exposing her (nice term!), destroying her career and more as detailed in Ch01.

With an end now in view for her, it will probably be better for it to run the course than rock the boat too much.

The end point is, its just fantasy!

I hope you're enjoying reading them (complete with plot holes) as much as I enjoy writing them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Great!!!Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great story - wonderful plot

Dear Ug,

Congratulations, that’s a hot story. Incredible hot story. You have a great style, especially the mindset of Victoria is realistic described and her reactions are very plausible. Her personality and her thinking, and most important her inner struggle is excellent described. Don't care if Michael has a stronghold on her or not, enough is that she believes it. The nylon fetish and the idea with the shoe, great, really, I only agree, yes let Michael and the other teenage boys take her over, her mind and body, more and more into deeper and deeper depravity. Definitely a 5 stars rating from me

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
still waiting

Come on with ch4.Great stuff!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Hot damn.... I can't wait until Michael fucks a load up her puss.

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