All Comments on 'Violet vs Sara'

Amazing, that's all I can say. Extremely well written and hot as hell :) Bravo to a job well done.

One of the hottest stories I've ever read. Amazingly well-written.

More, please!

This one had me glued to the screen so much I think I regret blinking, and it's so sexy, my goodness.

Wow. All I could say. More please

I've been reading stories on this site religiously for the past several months and this is hands down the best story I've EVER read. (All due respect 2 all my other favorite authors.) Everything was on point. Plot, dialogue, characters, imagery. A translation 2 film might not even do this justice. The sex wasn't as over the top as I normally prefer, but as desciptive as u were, it didn't have 2 be. The intensity of each characters' experience in Sara's thrall was vividly drawn out. Awesome work! I'll be looking out 4 more.

Truly awesome. The best story I've read on this site, smooth dialog, likable characters, brilliant descriptions its absolutely fantastic. Also, the only story I've read that made me feel anything other than straight lust and arousal. Violet and Jim are spot on as a couple, they feel real. I loved the part after Violet had talked with Doug for the first time, and she realized what her powers could do to Jim if she let herself become like Sara. Ha never thought I'd get a moral lesson about the abuse of power on a site like this, but bravo.

I have never commented before on any story but it was this story that sparked my interest in supernatural sensual femdom. I am a reader of your blog too but I thought for my first comment it had to be here on what is probably my favourite sex story of all time. I really like your blog too.

Hey!this is certainly a good write up !!! Looking forward to more adventured from voilet! Well done

I'm not into Dom as a prefer equal footing /sexfight fiction but this was a good read

Awesome story :) One of my all time favorites

I haven't ever said this about any story I've read on this site, but you could turn this into a good Hollywood movie, it has elements of everything I watch movies for anymore...it could be Underworld, Riddick, and Charmed if given the time to be written into a screen play.... I would love to see a part 2 of this story... Stellar job!

Incredible story

Thank you all for the compliments over the years! I'm glad this story has been able to entertain so many for so long. :)

It was great, having multiple conflicts kept me wanting more,

This could so easily go into more stories, this would make great ground work for it, would love to see you do it if you have it in you,