All Comments on 'Virgin's Journey to Submission Ch. 01'

More please!!

Nice start. Very interested in reading more. Like the fact that you subbie is not only a newbie but a virgin to boot! I hope we will learn more too about her Master.

I can see this turning into a very exciting story; thank you for bringing it to us and please post Chapter 2 soon!

Good work - well done - five stars.

and enticing! Your word muse is with you.

Maybe it's time to ramp up the action and develop these characters.

Thanks and take care...hcl

I can not wait to read more ;) I know there are many ”good girls” that crave this story and want to be the virgin in your story...as well as men that are Masters, daddies, or want to be one, too!

Had me stroking ;)

Kisses,

Naughtydad469

Oh man this is good shit, I like how the narrator speaks to the reader.