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by oneguy4fun

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Trainwrecks are not erotic. More psycho femdom but I guess that's how so many guys need to justify it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Get an editor

Then get a decent storyline. This was just ridiculous. Even for fiction this was ludicrous.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
good start

I can't wait to read the next part

mrwidehorizonsmrwidehorizonsabout 9 years ago
Can't wsit to see more!

Love where this is going. And that he can't cum until he pulls it off! Great story

kellijane001kellijane001about 9 years ago
So hot

these stories have me begging to be the guy. can't believe im begging to surrender my manhood.

Robbie (kelli)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

I agree that I cannot wait for the next installment!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
sequel?

Sequel awesome story

Longjohnsilver30Longjohnsilver30almost 9 years ago
Wonderful opener

Please update. Very promising start and with an excellent body of work behind you, I cannot wait to see where this goes

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
When?

I am getting tired of waiting for the sequel. When can we expect it? This is a good start, but we deserve a finish. We need to know how it finishes.

Thanks

HowdconstHowdconstover 8 years ago
Sequel?

I have asked before. When can we expect another installment?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Excellent

Well written and very will thought out, please give us a sequel, you've got a lot of promise and potential

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
The best

The best and most well written story I have ever read in Literotica. Please write more.

Sissboi1Sissboi1almost 5 years ago
Can't wait for the follow up

You do a really good job spinning these tails of regular dudes being feminized. Well done.

locker314locker314about 3 years ago
Update please!

When will there be an update please?!

vodudevodude3 months ago

Wow lovd this, wish you continued this story more. However I was expecting the wife to enter the hotel, thinking Mistress reached out to her before hand for his setup.

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