by oneguy4fun
Wow lovd this, wish you continued this story more. However I was expecting the wife to enter the hotel, thinking Mistress reached out to her before hand for his setup.
You do a really good job spinning these tails of regular dudes being feminized. Well done.
The best and most well written story I have ever read in Literotica. Please write more.
Well written and very will thought out, please give us a sequel, you've got a lot of promise and potential
I am getting tired of waiting for the sequel. When can we expect it? This is a good start, but we deserve a finish. We need to know how it finishes.
Thanks
Please update. Very promising start and with an excellent body of work behind you, I cannot wait to see where this goes
these stories have me begging to be the guy. can't believe im begging to surrender my manhood.
Robbie (kelli)
Love where this is going. And that he can't cum until he pulls it off! Great story
Then get a decent storyline. This was just ridiculous. Even for fiction this was ludicrous.
Trainwrecks are not erotic. More psycho femdom but I guess that's how so many guys need to justify it.