All Comments on 'Vow To My Princess'

by Kikori

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impressiveimpressiveover 15 years ago
Good luck in the contest!

~ Imp (Alessia Brio)

PrincessErinPrincessErinover 15 years ago
Good

A few parts of the story could be improved on, especially her physical description (40G with a thin waist is not possible). I also found it weird that she was talking to his parents and the whole idea of waiting until marriage for sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Decent

The sex part is fun, but the rest is hard to follow. It was not clear what was going on in the beginning.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
:)

Wow :) Me and my boyfriend share the same opinion :) We do just about everything except go all the way since we're saving that for our honeymoon :)

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