All Comments on 'Waiting and Watching'

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peggytwittypeggytwittyover 18 years ago
I don't see a story here

This story leaves me mystified as to I surmise a roommate who watches them eat and snuggle and walk off to bed. This is not to telling of any of the story characters, just abstract and self-serving half thoughts. I guess I’m too dense to find this romantic or even interesting in anyway. I just don’t see this as a complete story.

Sorry, just my take.

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