All Comments on 'Waitress'

However I consider the source and the audience

but it could have been a bit longer and you could have drawn out the sex scene a lot more rather than "jumping" into it, so to speak.

I agree w/ "good story". Longer would be a plus. I especially liked her trying to focus on a blow job while someone else is fucking her pussy. I thought that was a nice touch. I'd like to hear more about her conflict between letting someone whom she didn't know examine her body and her need for a job and perhaps being involved in a three-some. "Dumb" puzzles me. If he doesn't like the story, the general content of the story, etc., what is he doing 1) finishing reading the story and 2) on this web site to begin w/? I'm curious about what stories someone like that rates highly. I notice that the highest rated stories tend to be stories about gays.

wished i was her!