All Comments on 'Walking in My World'

your missing words. you barely described her. needs more sex. oh, and any dude would drop the playstation.

i did however enjoy the cartoon references. that was good for a humor story.

-outlaw

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Loved the satire, loved the surrealistic feel, loved the raw but true-to-life comedy, and especially the creativity. Honestly, the only critique I have involves grammatical error—to instead of too, encase instead of incase? Anyway, loved the story, loved the creativity.

Chad